First line community review

The first line or paragraph is always one of the toughest, but most important lines to perfect a book. So I thought we might be able to share and review each other's first lines (or paragraphs)

One of my most recent opening lines is ↓
This catastrophe all started with two of my little brothers entering my office. They greeted me with a quick bow, then set a hefty case before me on my desk.